thats very pretty and sad.

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Your inner child has been eating paste again <SUSHI FORTUNE>

ouch... that poem gives off a strong feeling of sadness...which yes I know it's supposed to. Well written.

Thank you

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So often we don't struggle to improve conditions
We struggle for the right to say we improved conditions
Somewhere a man stands, walks across the room, and breaks his nose against the door
Somewhere these people are keeping records
And writing a book

Thank you very mucho

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So often we don't struggle to improve conditions
We struggle for the right to say we improved conditions
Somewhere a man stands, walks across the room, and breaks his nose against the door
Somewhere these people are keeping records
And writing a book

Great, as always. If you enter that and don't get some sort of recognition for it, then i will lose all faith in humanity. Crap, too late. I will lose all faith in......committees. Bah, same problem. No, not committees - commies! No more faith in commies. Wait.....crap! Ok, i will lose faith in.....root beer. Tasty tasty root beer. No, i could never lose faith in such a delectable beverage. I will be angry. Lets just leave it at that.

Good additions/changes by the way. It does flow better now. Except 'dirge'. I just think that word is funny. Makes me laugh everytime. So for me, it doesn't quite fit, but for everyone i'm sure its great. Don't change it just cause of me.

Good job man.

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Whats worse? Apathy or Ignorance
.......don't know, don't care

Thanks don man
Your monologues are always a hoot

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Somewhere a man stands, walks across the room, and breaks his nose against the door.
Somewhere these people are keeping records and writing a book.
And as we turn the pages we call out the sounds of nothing.
The sounds of a vanishing alphabet...

Woah. I can feel the Used inspiration, though if you hadn't of mentioned it, I don't know if I would have even seen it. I really, really like it. It speaks to me, on so many different levels. Makes me feel sorry for her, makes me remember everything I put myself through, and also makes me feel hope. Hope for myself, and hope for humankind as a whole. All in all, I seriously love this!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay

Wowza thanks very much, for the fav and everything.
Thats probably the nicest complement on my writing ive ever received
Thanks again for reading!

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Somewhere a man stands, walks across the room, and breaks his nose against the door.
Somewhere these people are keeping records and writing a book.
And as we turn the pages we call out the sounds of nothing.
The sounds of a vanishing alphabet...

Hey, anytime. You've given me some amazing comments, so it's about time I give some back! And man, I love you're writing, so don't thank me for the fav. I should thank you for writing it!

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I held a fallen star and it wept for me, dying
I feel the fallen stars encircle me now as they cry
Feeling surrounded so bored with mortality I decay